So: this is the opening to Ravine. I may or may not publish more here, because it's considered "publishing" if you put it on a blog. I realize it is very, very rough, but at least I walked into that country.
Ravine
Chapter One
On September 9, 2006, the moon, a waning gibbous but still
bright, showed its dry white mask well after eight-thirty p.m. As always, it shone in all directions and
over every landscape, including the town particular to this story, Ben Lomond,
California. Some of its light never
penetrates the deep canyons and thick redwood forests surrounding this part of
Santa Cruz County; there, roads snake upwards through steep hills, vanishing
into dead ends, and several homes cling for dear life on half-eroded cliffsides.
A
single street runs through the central part of town; small businesses, housed
in renovated clapboard buildings, line each side: a seamstress advertising
custom slipcovers, an art gallery, a dental office, a small library, an
auditorium called Park Hall where a
local theater company puts on plays, a dog grooming parlor, and a hairdresser. Here, the principal establishment is the Ben
Lomond Market, as spacious and well-stocked as a rural market can be, with a bright
green awning and posters on the sliding glass doors advertising weekly
specials. That September, pumpkins, acorn squash, and gourds had begun to
dominate the storefront produce display a bit earlier than usual, crowding out
the last of summer’s bounty as autumn edged in.
When I
remember that night, I always think the moon must have shone with a
particular coldness on a certain road in Ben Lomond called Love Creek, named
for an actual creek which cuts straight through the site of ancient
landslides. A more recent landslide in
1982 took out houses during a wild, flooding storm. Several bodies, including
those of two small children, still remain under those tons of dirt and rubble;
a wooden sign advises people to not dump garbage there. Next to the sign, someone has built a large
toy box, painted bright red and filled with faded stuffed animals in memory of
the two children, and a local Girl Scout troop hangs glass ornaments each
Christmas on a Douglas fir planted not long after the storm.
As the
road ascends into the mountains, it changes from pavement to dirt; landslides
rise on each side, masses of chalky brown mud dried into thick, overlapping layers. Trees
grow off plumb, twisted away by the unstable ground; branches dangle overhead, the
very definition of the word “widowmaker.”
The road itself gradually dwindles to a narrow ribbon of dusty white
sand and the creek becomes increasingly shadowed, revealing no trace of itself except
for the sound of rushing water.
For
many hours, light would have shone not at all into a particular ravine just at
the place where Love Creek rises again from the canyon and becomes, in the
dark, a flowing blackness more sensed than seen, braiding and unbraiding over
smooth stones. Eventually, the moon may have cast a miserly
silver on what rested just above the creek, cradled in leaf litter gathered for
years against a fallen redwood log: the facedown body of a young woman, six and
a half months pregnant, the back of her head a crushed and bloody mangle.Earlier, as the moon slipped above a break in the ridgeline, it surely must have watched with flat skull eyes the dented gray-and-blue Ford pickup raising pale clouds of sand and dust as it raced away down Love Creek Road, the truck bed empty except for a crumpled blue tarp, the driver at the wheel smiling or not, but certainly satisfied, released at last from the weight of his terrible burden.
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